Comments of chapter undefined of Hokage system in another world

I hope your novel will be different, and better constructed than the original novel, ah! and a secret should never be divulged. example, I had liked that "Leng Ruo Bing", thought that Feng zichen had an elder, during the auction fight. (the divine crystal and the fox). this confusion, would have been useful for the story, to hide his identity. there are really plot issues, even a perfect susano much bigger than madara's susano... its made me imagined at "power rangers". ah yes the feeling that feng zichen stays on the spot to take blows for no reason... it lacked fluid action for me... good luck with your version of the story. moreover, thanks to the original novel. we know how the world is (star continent / black continent etc), there is not necessarily a need to do a lot of work on the construction of the kingdom or continent etc in short I hope to see a rare pearl.