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Comments of chapter undefined of The Blood Luna

The Blood Luna

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AlvarieB
AlvarieBLv11AlvarieB

Only thing I'm uncomfortable with so far is that the story is in one whole paragraph. There are no chapter breaks other than accidental ones. Everything feels like a very long run on sentence. The story is keeping me going though.

2yr
AlvarieB
AlvarieBLv11AlvarieB

Paragraph breaks not chapter breaks.

2yr

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Becca_Johnson_8211
Becca_Johnson_8211Lv1Becca_Johnson_8211

I love it and I have to say that I started laughing when the scrambled eggs flew. I couldn't imagine my parents doing anything like this but, it really was great. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

2yr
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Trublood_3
Trublood_3AuthorTrublood_3

Thank you for your feedback. I tried editing it, and the chapters became even stranger. I'm new to the web format and will keep trying to make it better. -Tru

2yr
Trublood_3
Trublood_3AuthorTrublood_3

I wanted the readers to experience those fun moments with your parents. Sometimes, it's unexpected and sometimes it's normal everyday life. -Tru

2yr
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