Duncan_Randar
Well at least you didn't disgraced us readers it's a good story so far :p About author notes I sometimes read them and sometimes I don't. It's kinda random.
Duncan_Randar:Yes...you're right, he believes that writers who write fanfiction are writers who need training wheels to ride bikes...Well then, let's say I hope I don't disgrace him twice in a row! Thank you for your comment Makkak and for reading my author's note...not everyone does that lol.
I'm liking it for the most part, but everything to this point just seems so....juvenile. The interactions with the angels, how Duncan acts around people. It just seems a bit odd for someone meant to be a paladin. Then again, a turn for the more serious may seem jarring if it's too sudden at this point. At any rate, you do you, author. I'll keep reading and see what you have in mind for your story.