Did this become a fic about a VRMMO game instead of dimensional chat group and fantasy powers??
Tease a quest in another world where they will play a VRMMO and then go on to explain about a totally different one for 5 chapters. Won’t this just happen all over again when they meet up for the quest?
Only Sense online is a little Boring without The original Shun, isn't It?
The only Thing that keep me Reading OSO was Shun personality so i am really bored with this chapter and will Skip to more interesting parts further in your history