Ryu_Akatsuki_8599
The story is good but I feel you are making the mc too immature and everyone else too strong. It's weird that a child who has just unlocked their magic like draco to be able to use so many different spells that are really good. The mc doesn't feel like he has much talent and it seems he will have to rely on the shop to actually be good especially against these purebloods who seem to have become extremely powerful.