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Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Celestial: Rebirth of the 2nd House

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jEONGjEONG
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I really love the introduction! Your vocabulary is wide and I love your way of words. On to the next chapter!

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Kidd_memore
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I feel like this is a Greek mythology version of the Zodiacs!!!! I wish there was a longer introduction of the Celestials before they died. But good chapter!!

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Romasss
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Well many big paragraphs... no character appearance... and many hard words... You need to improve this chapter to make it more interesting and the setting is good and the storyline could be good if the celestial being was reincarnated except of giving to one man whose children will hold its power!!!!