Comments of chapter undefined of Idle Cultivation

So, having finished the first chapter, the thing that irks me is grammar, there are many easy mistakes easy to be fixed, mostly related to past tense. But the premise of the story is good, I feel it has potential. If you need an editor, give me a call either here or on Facebook. I can make your 'baby' easier to read for an English-speaking audience, I'm not the best at this kind of thing, but people generally praise my grammar in the many novels I've written over the years. Anyway, good luck.