Comments of chapter undefined of Re: Evolution Online
Re: Evolution Online
Yolohy
Chapter comments12
yes yes....more...more....there is soo much stuff to touch on...I think I am going to read over the entire book and make notes...Liam already has skill books he is owed from the system shop on earth...not sure if he will only be able to access those from that particular shop on earth....the one that was trading with the vampires...then...the lady who was at the second to last world tree seed fragment that he put into his spacial artifact...dragon lady also in his spacial artifact...luna...think mention should be made if Liam's soul is finally completely fixed or not from absorbing the soul blood beasts (I think should just say yes to that...because he still need to power up his body, fix his mana core, fix his nether core and find harmony between the two...it's time to start checking things off the list and making progress in other areas of the story...also...Luna and her progress can be another big area...the Universal auction...the little girl he made friends with...some kind of story element that tells him where was his tutorial world and how he can sneak back in...or at least unlock the rest of the soulmancer legacy....also I feel like Lord (can't remember his name...the elfbwith the smithing legacy) he can also take something from the BattleSmith legacy that he unlocked in the tutorial. Sooooo many things you can do...go back to...touch on an exapand...come on! this book should be number one....I have faith in you and this story.
