Comments of chapter undefined of Re: Evolution Online
Re: Evolution Online
Yolohy
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I may be in the top 20 I hope, but if I am not feel free to disregard my suggestion. However I would love to see Liam somehow develop a karmic ability that allows him to mess with the guy in glasses sanity. I think it would be great to read as Kuskes unshakable faith in his older brother erodes to backstabbing.
didnt know Im a top fan. lol my requests, more big daddy elfo luna deserves a fan club in the book. a big one. violet should be an actual character instead of a treasure magnet in rabbit form replace the in game text chat with voip channels or some kind of mental communication. its a fivr simulation. noone has time to use a keyboard in the heat of battle. thats just asking to be decapitated address the yin physique mia has that was mentioned in the early chapters liam should suffer more serious failures, setbacks and hardships. i want to read a book where Ill always question if the MC will succeed or fail. whether things will be ok or if theyll just get worse. catastrophes bring out the best and the worst in people. they shouldnt just be conveniently swept under the rug with a Deus Ex Machina.
