Comments of chapter undefined of Civilization

my civ would be this

Wow. you get my expectations. I always really hope that there are novel that have similar genre to "The World Online" and "Lords Empire" i hope that this is the one I've been waiting.

What a descriptive way of narrating. I can practically imagine it like I'm their myself. Greatly love it. I specially love stories where I could just imagine and immerse myself on it. A great first chapter for me. I've been wanting to read a proper civilization type story. Hope this story quench my thirst for it. Also hoping that the story don't focus too much on harem or romance. Especially the cliche ones. Hope there's a build up first and that MC don't think with his other head. I just mentioned it due to the elves thingy given how it was said. And that it was even repeated a few times. I have great expectation for the story given the unique premise like no inventory, no starter pack/kit, etc. for a game like setting. But more so due to the high rating of the story. Hope it's all true and that the story doesn't disappoints.

Interesting concept. I've seen creating religions and heard of creating games/NPCs, not civilizations though..

I just hope you actually do justice to 10 times the size of earth thing. Usually novels have like 100 or 1000 times the size but then they travel to all corners of the plane with armies nonetheless within days.

Intersting

So much higher than my expectations good job

Nice

I thank you

Thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

The paragraphs are too dense. Need more spacing so it's easier to read

You could really use some adjustments to your paragraphs. Otherwise, decent start.

Interesting prospect.

WOW 😳

If I ever play a game and it ever have description like that I throwing my device

I like the intro.

Only one request. Please don't make MC a p*us*y who is afraid of women and stays a virgin.

THE WORLD MUST BE LIKE THIS IM TIRED OF PLAIN AND ORDINARY URGH~,~