Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Ship of Lust

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making a mihawk woman is when he's strong enough take her like a woman (google translate)

author san, I don't like that you changed the chapters. though you did it just to remove some abilities, it was also a good moment for the hero to realise the error of his ways. please change it back. Ethan getting a second opportunity, came with a lot of realisations about his behaviour. this is good for character growth. I was personally really engaged with that part. that was a moment where this novel went from being just a fan fantasy to something real. please consider this.

Next episode : Zora VS mihawk 😍😍😍😍😍😍

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thx for the chp for me it was good even before u deleted the chps

while I don't agree 'fully' on rewriting the drama chapter, I think it was a chapter that REALLY didn't mesh well with the tone of the fic. Don't get me wrong, I like the fact that it addressed a part of his personality that I found extremely unappealing, BUT doing so in that manner adds unnecessary drama, whereas a self realisation of his character flaw would have been a lot better.

thanks for the chapter

Tanks for the chapter nice work

thanks for the chapter

Guarda autore, ho riletto il capitolo di Sanju dopo che l'hai modificato e francamente non ha molto senso il fatto che lui abbia questo cambiamento repentino nei confronti di Ann visto che non sa le conseguenze che sono successe e poi hai tolto anche la parte in cui perde le abilità e adesso non avrebbe senso toglierle perché è cambiato quindi non so come farai ad aggiustare tutto

thx for the chapter

keep up the good work author!!!

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Arigathanks Gozaimuch for the chappy.

Thks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter