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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Ship of Lust

fetishman
fetishmanLv13fetishman

it better be a daughter alright all of his future babies should be daughter

FogOfDreams
FogOfDreamsLv5FogOfDreams

Why is that?

Roy_Benavides
Roy_BenavidesLv12Roy_Benavides

Gotta love when immature reincarnators suddenly get hit with the "You need to mature" stick. This makes this fanfic 100% better.

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

Well, it was fun until now... The kid came too soon and brought down the fanfic heavily. I never seen a single fanfic pulling of the MC have a kid so soon... Should have at least waited untill Sabaody Archipelago, a kid is seen as a "goal" showing the end and begining of something new. Having it so soon make it lose all its importance and heavily break the flow of the novel.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

alfin something different, as always almost in all fanfic, always to the protagonists are everything perfect and have no problems, reason why they do not grow, but with this will take more seriously the world and will not go in search of many girls.

Tatsumi810
Tatsumi810Lv13Tatsumi810

Nice chapter

Incommensurable
IncommensurableLv10Incommensurable

the story was good but now that he has a child it would bother him too much it's over I give up this fanfiction too early to have a baby 😔😔

XenomorphicFrog
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I will probably read a few more chapter before I decide if I should drop. Parenthood Isn't something I look for in fanfics.

WiLeYBiGhEaD
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv11WiLeYBiGhEaD

Personally, I think it is way to early in the story for having children. They have around %80 of the one peice story left or more. Hopefully it turns out ok.

SamiOyakodonLover
SamiOyakodonLoverLv14SamiOyakodonLover

well at least Lucy won't have problems at birth because...you know she is rubber she can just expand and boom the baby is out

ELLOMYGELLO
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Aizen_Sousuke
Aizen_SousukeLv4Aizen_Sousuke

its funny how people think that having a kid automatically makes people mature, and Lucy is not mom material she is 17 at this point. I know irl this is not too uncommon but it is rare in one piece.

Xuefang1
Xuefang1Lv4Xuefang1

I don't like the idea of her being pregnant 😅🤰 it's too early 😔😔

Taitiruk
TaitirukLv14Taitiruk

it could be a girl

Obsideon
ObsideonLv4Obsideon

Give me moooooore

decilence
decilenceLv4decilence

everyone complaining it's too early , but the point is that baby were never gonna happen because of his skill. Now what i imagine is the girls struggling being moms , showing off their skills to entretain the baby and then fighting with the diapers. Also here is da bebi looking at his family.

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

So, was the kid erased of killed further down the line or is it still there?

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

i don't know but i think it's too early, they aren't even in grand line yet ..... good luck on your story 😕

Xuefang1
Xuefang1Lv4Xuefang1

I think it was too early to get her pregnant 😅

Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv13Leylin_123

me gusta esto del embarazo, les da mas apego y motivacion a los MC.

PlayValak
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