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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Ship of Lust

Tsu_Tsu
Tsu_TsuLv13Tsu_Tsu

I think it's a good idea It'll make the book have some wholesomeness not just s*x all the time

LoverOfGula
LoverOfGulaLv2LoverOfGula

wholesomeness is mid since hes basically a dimensional god if author makes him act like any run of the mill civilian who awakens some fatherly instinct and i have to read cringy doting parent trope imma drop.

Auronos
AuronosLv3Auronos

I think your decision about the pregnancy was too early, but it's your story, you do what you want, I just hope the MC only has daughters.

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIiLv3AKASHIIIi

I hate kids in fanfiction.

DaoistMaypp7
DaoistMaypp7Lv15DaoistMaypp7

please No Not this

Tatsumi810
Tatsumi810Lv13Tatsumi810

Nice chapter

Nizar_Abdennour
Nizar_AbdennourLv3Nizar_Abdennour

To be honest i think this will be a good for his character building, because i feel that he still doesn't take everything seriously and a baby will just do that (at least it's better than something happening bad to the girls)

Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4Venerable_Adam

ARE YOU CRAZY DON'T TELL ME SHE PREGNANT

LoreLover
LoreLoverLv4LoreLover

I dont think this is a good idea...

Asura160
Asura160Lv4Asura160

Just wait till garp and ace and dragon and sabo hear about this

9Satan
9SatanLv29Satan

The concept is original, and for that reason I'm on board with it. Ignore these plebs that want the same copy-paste story over and over again, spice it up a bit. Don't give in, author!

Aizen_Sousuke
Aizen_SousukeLv4Aizen_Sousuke

I'm fine with kids but its too early

Gomtuu76
Gomtuu76Lv4Gomtuu76

Depends if the pregnancy lasts for a few days and kids are fully gown in a week. I think I read one once that is how they dealt with it. You know magical BS stuff.

RealMainCharacter
RealMainCharacterLv14RealMainCharacter

Well...Gonna see where this is heading

JojoVanish
JojoVanishLv1JojoVanish

More!!!!

Solarious
SolariousLv5Solarious

Have it where cause she ate devil fruit it takes a while longer for development. Reason? Since when is logic valid in one piece lol

Grimsight
GrimsightLv6Grimsight

thanks for the chapter, this intrigues me as to how it will continue, because if you have a normal pregnancy, you will have to change some things in logtown

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

DanteRz
DanteRzLv1DanteRz

Только не беременность

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CGMBCH
CGMBCHLv1CGMBCH

Thanks for the Chapter

SupremeOne
SupremeOneLv3SupremeOne

I think this would be more interesting. I also wonder what will be the reactions of garp and dragon.