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Comments of chapter undefined of Small upgrade system

Abigail_Lozano
Abigail_LozanoLv15Abigail_Lozano

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Small_Otaku
Small_OtakuAuthorSmall_Otaku

thanks

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Viduus
ViduusLv15Viduus

so far the story is not bad at all, have you thought about getting someone to edit it for you? it would improve the chapters by a good amount.

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Paltime
PaltimeLv4Paltime

The beginning is going good. If I may add, writing all the stat window again and again at each upgrade is kind of heavy

Viduus
ViduusLv15Viduus

also maybe in future chapters you add this, but maybe add in how much each skill costs for upgrade points.

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KuramaTobi
KuramaTobiLv15KuramaTobi

Great story 👍🏽

Confusion
ConfusionLv13Confusion

Upgrading from F->E made it go from 5%->25% but E->D was only 25%->35%. Seems weird.