Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn: A vengeful miracle doctor
Reborn: A vengeful miracle doctor
Willowy_ml
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What happened here? I am confused. I was reading: Yi Shuyan could manage teaching on her own. The two of them usually did this. This is followed by: “Here sir,” she said as she gave the security personnel her ID and visiting card. They checked her things … She didn’t want to be here. So I start thinking that the school has a very tight security. And why does Yi Shuyan not want to be there? Just 6 sentences before this, it says Yi Suyan could manage teaching on her own. I assume she likes teaching. And then we have the next sentence: Jao Ying didn’t think she’ll ever get used to coming to this place. So, okay, it is Jao Ying who gave the security personnel her ID and visiting card, not Yi Shuyan. Why do we have these 4 sentences about Jao Tong having a day off and Yi Shuyan being okay with it in this part of chapter 39? So who is Jao Ying? And we have Lao San, her mother. Lao San has been in the mental institution for a couple of years (a couple of years = 2 years). She has seen Jao Ying grow up from a kid to an adult but she doesn’t remember who Jao Ying is.
in other parts of the story, when there is a change in setting/location, there are 2 blank line spaces to indicate the change. in this case ( and several others), there is no similar indication and one would assume that the next paragraph is a continuation of the narrative in the previous paragraph. but reading further on, one will realize that the paragraph is about a totally different narrative. in this case, we have one paragraph talking about Yi Shuyan and the next about Lao San and her daughter, 2 new characters without any introduction on how they fit in the story, in an entirely different location. I guess that's where my confusion lies. by the way, Lin Quingquing behaving and knowing her place in this chapter is a nice touch. And Lin Yaoha! Perhaps this mother daughter duo may still have some sort of redemption in the story. I'm even looking forward to when Yaoha can stand up straight, look at the Lin family in their eyes and make them realize how badly they have treated her (Yaoha).
Willowy_ml:is it confusing,or?