Comments of chapter undefined of Magus of the Wizarding World

mc x hermione and luna

Having Hermione on his side will be a good thing for the MC. She is very talented and can achieve far more than in the canon if groomed well.

Well most likely people you are not forgetting this is a collab with marvel world and we nice female leads in marvel like Skye,natasha,Sif,Hope pym,Wanda, maria hill because our MC is analytical and calculative with his approach that kind individually may feel appealing to her. Take your pick. Even if he wants a relationship in wizarding world I always like older woman Nymphodora tonks is just couple years older than him I would like to see if they can get in a relationship.

it's kinda hard to imagine the mc in any relationship since he has no charecter. This story is interesting but the mc has no personality at all. no likes, dislikes, no expressed feelings what so ever. Someone like Mione or Luna just dont make sense. they are too bland, innocent and young. imagine how boring the couple would be. In order to create a pairing the mc needs to be matched with someone with a strong, forcefully (flirty?) personality cos the mc just doesnt have the charecter (currently) for it. needs some development imo. With the mental limitations, It was a good time to slow the story down and focus on some charecter building and development.

MC x Hermione

Just please don't make Hermione too annoying please...

Thanks for the chapter

Tahst creepy kids at 11 are cute if not annoying little monsters

Pls Cho Chang X mc 🛐

I think the novel would be better if it was only a harry Potter fanfic but please do not make it a harem only 1 romance target is better.

Hermione es la mejor personaje femenino a mi parecer ❤️❤️✨ El crush de todo aficionado de Harry Potter UwU

+1

Thank for good chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

I thank you for the chapter.

You really need to work on your dialogue. All the conversations in this chapter felt unnatural. Descriptions aren't bad though there are a bunch of redundancies. Also the massive plot hole of him somehow not noticing marvel need to be closed like dozens of chapters ago. But I'm sure you know that but realized it would be hard to fix at this point.

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So nice when there are actual conversations....