Comments of chapter undefined of Love or Truth

Okay I'd rather not leave a review here, a) cuz it is too soon, and b) because there is way too much to critique here, and something like that could be bad for the novel. firstly, the dialogue, it feels too choppy, you don't really feel anything from the dialogue, I get you are trying to add context after, but there needs to be some form of expression in the dialogue itself. secondly, I get this is your first work, so it's understandable that your chapters are short, but the plot is moving way too slowly. there is a lot more, but I want you to continue writing, and if you improve on this alone you'd be doing a lot better. I honestly hope you keep writing and improving.