BLACK_GLOOM
This is confusing to read. The flow of the story is bad
LET THEIR BE CARNAGE!
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then mKe sure use those as plot and enemy of some kind that will make story great
now it's got interesting but also how many people hero killed in the before reincarnation
WAR!!!
great chap
nice one
so is he going to get a power up cause I don't think he is really ready.
NOICE
