Comments of chapter undefined of Traveler of Worlds (English)

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he author dont worry about spoilers….if they are reading a fanfic then they should know there are spoilers! keep up the good work

I understand by now that English is certainly not your first language, and i get that it's hard to get it right. I mean they story looks good for now. But it's painful to read with the terrible grammar. I mean i have moments where i legit pulled my hair in frustration reading this. My eyes hurt. Please re-edit the chapters of you can. It will DEFINITELY make the reading experience way WAY better. Otherwise it's good.

tf he look like?

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Thanks for the chapter.