Shoomoon
Is this another of those I'm in a new world but I want to find a way back it all costs stories? I dont want to be that guy but... I could care less about his previous world or family. I dont want to keep reading about some depressed kid that keeps thinking about his family as motivation to keep on going. This is all just personal opinion but I do prefer if the option of returning is never an option in the first place so the mc can live and adapt to the new world. In reading these types of stories for the fantasy and all that and being reminded about boring old trash earth every now and then will get annoying. Just an initial comment on Chapter 1 OS my opinion may change later so dont hate.