Comments of chapter undefined of Guide to raise my cutie husbands
Guide to raise my cutie husbands
fairytail72
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Sorry to see you are having complaints. I understand that English isn't your first language and it is difficult with all the rules. Grammar errors don't bother me. I am enjoying your story and don't find it boring. I think the reverse roles is interesting and I believe you should write your story as you see fit. I find that over describing characters and environment can take away from story so I have enjoyed the simple style of this story. Some individuals just like to complain no matter what you do. Your story is great and a joy to read.
Please don’t change, I love your story very much. Beside your story is your brain child. Your vison for this world is very interesting and has me hooked good. People tend to believe in negative views instead of positive. Overcome that hurtle and be the best version of you as an author. Thanks for your hard work. P.S. even some English speaking people don’t have great grammar. Your doing terrific 😉👍
in response to your note #5. please dont. She's perfect the way she is. #6 I love way u describe the mers is just right. Dont change them. Amd lastly ur story is wonderful. I enjpy the slice of life and ur story had elements of that. Some of my favorite story lines are everyday struggles. Your doing great. Your grammar has never bothered me. Your story is consistently one of my favorite stories to read.
No. don't Change the story. it's Unique on its own . Just do what you love. Don't do it because others doesn't like it. IF they don't like it? THEN THEY SHOULD HAVE STOP READING IT .Than criticizing people because of their oh so perfect grammar. Please do what you love. Don't let them bother you .We love You author. We know Your worked Harder than anyone elses. Again take your time. Let the story flow. it's your own ideas if you will change it? what will happen to the story then? Again it's Unique and Beautiful on it's own. so.. Fighting Author-Sama 🤗😘😘
This is your story and the characters are what you envision. If people don’t like it then that’s fine. You can’t please everyone. As long as you’re happy, that’s the important part. If they want typical gender roles, then they can write a book themselves or read something else. Don’t change for anyone. This book is unique and that’s the appeal. You’re doing great!
Author, please don't change. You are doing a great job, even though English is not your first language. You are not the first, nor will you be the last person to put your work on here with grammar issues. So if they have a problem, they can either stay or leave.This story is your hard work! I understand taking creative criticism, but no one should be telling you how this story should go because you wrote it and you had a vision when doing so. If they want a story to follow their thoughts, then they should go write their own and see how hard it can be.Please keep up the good work and don't let anyone deter you from writing.