No_Existence
Thank you for the chapter ... I sincerely love your FF ... in terms of what other readers comment on your story ... you don't have to worry much ... as readers are looking for creative stories that show us a world of possibilities we never thought of ... you create a new world for us to see ... so create your world with your own colors and avoid making the story belong to someone else ... (translated gloogle)
Im reading this story again now i understand why i was frustrated at the first time i read this development it was because he admitted he was reincarnated to a being that he wished for that made me uncomfortable because when reading a isekai story having a past life is a secret you should always keep to yourselfno matter what happens and seing that rule broken frustrated me cause trusting someone is way harder than anything else he just met her and then he narrates his whole life seeing that there was no reason to trust and give out a secret that is the fundamental reason for his new life to a being powerful enough to kill him just because and i don't trust higher powers like the goddess what guarantees she helps him if he is endangered she can always find a better human that can be raised into her equal that is not broken can be trusted and manipulated thats the reason i didn't like reading it the first time trusting being that can screw him with ease theres nothing special about him many can be as good or better than him in infinite existence he is just a broken human like most people
Good chapter dude!I hope w/this chapter most the haters quit hating on the way you do stuff without trying to at least give you ways to ‘improve it’ also (I can see the re:zero influence in the way your charcter resembles Subaru’s breakdowns and also his come up it reminded me alot of the echidna scene where she forced him to remember his parents n what not and then when he cried that he can return by death,overall it’s really good and I think many people will enjoy stuff like that when you write it in a good way like you did)