Comments of chapter undefined of The Omniversal Chat Group

I don’t think you should rewrite this it’s good and the beginning of the story it’s okay it shows that you were just starting but it becomes awesome as you’ve continued

I have many things to say and the first thing is that I really like how the story goes, one minor thing and that is the chat of the bad guys/villains, it seems unnecessary to me even knowing that you are planning something, I can't stand it, for the girl the only one who I see Rin Toshaka as a new partner but she is bad with technology and I know she could be a better partner for Ben or Asta to some extent, today other complaints but they are insignificant against "evil chat". If you want to talk about it I can do it.