Comments of chapter undefined of Ocean Master

sorry, dropped, the way mc uses his skill is just ugh, i mean, common, a flaming sword? and there is no distance requirement for the manipulation, mc should have just turned the water(not all of it of course, that would be a waste of mana) in the bodies of the fish he fights against in air(or something acidic or or or, but we dont know the cost of transforming and such, so i just choose something extremely common, anyway) his use of the skill is just so horribly unimaginative and inefficient.

why would you giving him water manipulation and have him use flames, why would the water constructs be black, is he squidward, why would he need bow and arrow, when he can just create just arrows and fire it with his imagination

I enjoy the action, but i feel brain cells die at certain scenarios. The whole dissector theme you tried failed as horribly as possible, opportunity to fire pressured water to slice em in half or actually using the anatomy knowledge to affect the insides, resulting in kills of beings he already fought and studied, but not the ones he barely knows. Instead you write about flaming swords he probably never saw in his life.

Its weird that he Gets to use a bow and sword without hands. Couldnt he just breathe Fire or extend waterblades from his find or shoot a jet Blade …. That wouldve Been more immersive. Save the Actual tools for when he gets hands or a Support skill like telekinesis to use them …

author you lost me with the flame sword you would be better off making have water construct

Thanks for the chapter

I still enjoy it and will keep reading, since you clearly do have a vision for the story, the details are just ...weakly thought through

thx for the chapter😻

Obrigado pelo capitulo

Gracias por el capítulo