Comments of chapter undefined of Darien's Legacy

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TheShingPenAuthorTheShingPen

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

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Aislinn_JasperLv3Aislinn_Jasper

oohh, interesting start!

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JS13Lv1JS13

Not bad

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I_Am_PentaLv10I_Am_Penta

Nice start

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Hao_webnoveleditorLv4Hao_webnoveleditor

Pretty good writing, but the shift in multiple POV makes this novel a tad hard to follow.

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