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Comments of chapter undefined of Tavern in Another Dimension:Getting the Elf Queen Drunk at the Start

Vrtx
VrtxLv3Vrtx

too sudden. too fast to finish it :( why? we don't know what happened to the ghouls yet. or system rewards and alan's new drinks; no romantic scene for alan and queens :( I'm not satisfied with this ending.

Dragons33
Dragons33Lv15Dragons33

I'm sad to see this end. Especially when it seemed there were more plot points to be explored, but oh well. Thank you author and web novel for this great book.

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RinRyuu_16
RinRyuu_16Lv1RinRyuu_16

sigh why is the end so .....boring and mass produced sigh well it was a nice "book " but the end was stupid and dumb are you sure you are not just copy copy pasting this from mtl ( truly disappointed )

Chewyrice
ChewyriceLv15Chewyrice

ehh ending sucks, what was the point of pointing out the saddle for a dragon and other stuff.

hersheytemple
hersheytempleLv14hersheytemple

was good while it lasted but I'd rather it end here then get dragged out with no direction for the story.

Jedi2
Jedi2Lv15Jedi2

Sorry to see it end. Tks

PhantomFlame
PhantomFlameLv15PhantomFlame

Wow wasn’t the book to be this short

alwaysareader
alwaysareaderLv6alwaysareader

The End. Good Novel with so many funny moments it could go some more chapter but it could go wrong and end in a mess. Tnks 4 da Novel. Keep the good work coming. See ya in UR next work.

Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3Darren_Laudat

pick longer novels plz.

Selak4721
Selak4721Lv14Selak4721

It was interesting to read this story from the beginning to the end but I feel that it should not have ended like this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

darkpanday
darkpandayLv14darkpanday

it is sad to see that it seems cut the story short. Lots of open ended details like the dragon saddle, the ghouls and the enemies of the empire.

Wisp_of_mount_dew
Wisp_of_mount_dewLv12Wisp_of_mount_dew

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Diego_Nascimento
Diego_NascimentoLv2Diego_Nascimento

o autor deve ter ficado sem ideia pra fazer um final tão horrível, ele podia ter feito o protagonista enfrenta os ghoul, podia contar que a razão dele não poder cultivar foi porque seus pais selaram seu cultivo por que tinha uma linhagem muito poderosa, enfim não precisava ter um fim tão ridiculo

Greg_Chandler
Greg_ChandlerLv15Greg_Chandler

some times we just can't do all the things we have to in the time we have, I do wish would have kept going but it is hard to get them all done before our time limits

raeoflight1985
raeoflight1985Lv15raeoflight1985

yay for am actual ending... but it's a horrible ending

Ryan1971
Ryan1971Lv15Ryan1971

this book was well written...I wish there was more.....so many more things to explore .Very sad to see it end,but thank you author for the story

Ryan1971
Ryan1971Lv15Ryan1971

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Robbie_Ragsdale_8147
Robbie_Ragsdale_8147Lv15Robbie_Ragsdale_8147

when is the second part to be made