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Comments of chapter undefined of My All-Creation System

Twilight_1303
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Cringy and awkward. Lastly show off

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Lazy_Chicken_God
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Did they take a quest to exterminate the bandits. I think you should write in small things like this even if it's only mentioned to make it more believable. Vance as a former novel reader shouldn't have underestimated them and at least tried to get some benefits.

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Phi0fany_11531
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nice chapter