Comments of chapter undefined of Omniverse Mayhem

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Good chapter. Don't worry about Grayfia, the was still better Tham many other fics in which the summoned girl is made loyal from the beginning and doesn't question anything, it's good you didn't fall in that pitfall. as long as you don't make her immediately compliant and properly flesh out their relationship, you're good. As always my suggestion is to not rush whit the relationships between MC and heroine, it's fine to take one or two chap's to flesh out the relationship, add some meaningful interaction and maybe even some disagreement and conflict, it will make it look more real. Luckily the arifureta's arc will be a good opportunity to experiment on this with the heroine there Keep up the good work!

sike mc it's my lost brother? He get grayfia in first summon . What a lucky after all grayfia it's my waifu

can't recall if you've stated this or not. Author, there's so many amazing women out in entertainment universes. we don't need males from summonings or other places as close support characters. ignore my 'no dudes' words if it's already understood by everyone but me.

Really loved it....

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Another silly question from me author san😜. I hope it's not a bother. If he writes about one piece and Naruto and other famous animes, won't his woman from these worlds know that he knows them before even meeting them, that's of course if they find out?

I hope that he will not date Hori and break up with her because Hori found out about the supernatural side like the other fanfic i read

best luck ever (good choice), grayfia the best

Hmmm~ Interesting

HM, is the call not loyal right away?

i like story mix anime world like this,, need recommendation please, except start by mangaka

Спасибо за главу

Keep going please 🤩👌

Ty

nice chapter

man how is mc an anti hero ?

yesssss