Comments of chapter undefined of Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

It's such a great novel! So, so well written. I read shadow slave before, and now I found this gem. To me, it is kind of sad that you dropped/finished this one. I guess the reason why it was not as successfull is about marketing and luck, and maybe also genre. E. g. the frontpicture of the novel is not really so great in my opinion. However, one thing is amazing, and that is your writing style. You depict characters very well, and the dialogues are really exceptional. While shadow slave is more webnovel-style, this novel here is a thing that could find a publisher for a standard print book. I really hope you have success with your future writing and continue your journey as a novelist.

You are so talented, and I love reading your books! We will have them published under your real name one day. And you will be from the well-known voices of the century. If things are going to happen logically and fairly. Good luck!

Good so far

Well I’m late to the party, I got enthralled by the writing style from the first chapter, took me until the fifth to realize who the author was. You don’t miss do you? I’m looking forward to how this story unfolds, glad this popped up on my recommended.

I really like the story, how the characters are described - just a few words from the author and a lot more through their actions. The moment with a homeless man gave me creeps. It is a completely new experience for me (an experienced readder), and give a new fléur of mystery that makes me wanna continue reading. There are a few mistakes - mostly the misspelled words (If needed,i may pick out some of them) but for me it is not a problem at all - the idea, setting and atmosphere are fascinating. Thank you a lot!

Very good! I got shivers from reading this chap 👏

Just realized it was another of your books ♥️

E muito bom. Esse é o seuprimeiro romance, hein? Entao você tem muito talento, a novela é fantástica.

The story has been great so far. It's very captivating and your writing style is quite unique. There is some mystery surrounding matt which I can't wait to discover… can't wait to read what's next(⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

😁👍

I too have started to read this after recognising the title from the "Shadow Slave" dialogue between Soul Reaper and Sunny. I really hope that the months since the last update means this book is complete? Your writing, pace, characters, mood, setting and developed world are engrossing... and this is only the beginning!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola