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Comments of chapter undefined of I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

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I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

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blue_phoenix
blue_phoenixLv11blue_phoenix

Mc needs to be indifferent… right now he seems like a person who curry favor with superiors…its embarrassing for him to act like that even with a system

2yr
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Skardian
SkardianLv2Skardian

as he has no respect for the tian clan and has ignored the first princes presence.

2yr
Max255
Max255Lv6Max255

MC character needs some changes. He's speaking too much to defend. Let him stop speaking for his defense a little. It's becoming like a kid trying to defend himself. This is just a suggestion though....

2yr
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KIING
KIINGLv14KIING

Mc needs a change of character.

1yr
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Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

The grammar is dying in this chapter.

1yr
Darian
DarianLv6Darian

Thanks for the chapters!

2yr
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