yes i agree. it was short and sweet and to the point. i liked the pace of the story and i didnt feel like the ending was rushed. it was a good ending if i felt somewhat sad for Cole. that one mistake in his life cost him maybe a lifetime of happiness with someone[img=faceslap]
Love the book, just didn't like the ending 😢..
Should have given Cole a happier ending with a family of his despite the fact that he ruined his chances with his first love Ophelia.. Other than that it was a great read..
Great short story, I’m in tears with this ending! So happy she found her happinees and true love 💕💕. Sometimes we(Cole) live with our misstakes for a lifetime! Well done
I enjoyed the read. Quick and had tons of information to capture my interest. Karma karma karma. Life lessons learned. Thank you for writing this piece.