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Comments of chapter undefined of The world needs a savior

Ava_Smith_7073
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LordXedd
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Hey tell me where I mess up on english I plan on doing like maybe 20 chapters if one person says hey i like it can you do more then I will As Long as they talk to me on my chapters every once in awhile I’ll do more if You want More a week I can also do that not very Hard 😊❤️

LordXedd
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I just fixed a few mistakes in this chapter the best I can its the first chapter I’ve fixed so far expect more to be fixed later and will come back to this one and fix it more as well ❤️😇

LordXedd
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If you like it I Will continue for a long time it’s my first time wroting story online so critize me a lot so I can get better I just wabt to talk and be friends with readers 👉👈

Karmven
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Yeah fix your grammar but Seems good so far its readable