Master4thWall
Alright I don't get the reactions lol So...a mother freaking out over her kid being MIA for 2 whole hours straight is...cringe? like seriously? it was quite a realistic reaction, imo. And it's not like it was dragged or needlessly stretched to make it over dramatic either...in fact, this is the shortest chapter by far and I bet this whole event was not more than even 500 words so c'mon bruh
Not cringe for me, i understand the mom, father and sister worries. They live in a world where people can teleport, turn invisible and kidnap children for experiments is not uncommon. Maybe MC should come out clear about his other "Quirk" which allows him to enter "dungeons" to become strong?... that way the family would come to the dungeon with him.
ngl it is cringe but not that much, i've read far more cringe chap than this one, but hopefully the MC will not tell the System to anyone and please dont make the MC prohibited to "disappear" suddenly again, I mean he is like 7 yo now so if MC can't go grind in the dungeon till he is 15 or so he is practically wasting 8 years out of the remaininng yeats he have untill the got come and hunt for him. this is just an opinion of mine dont mind it.
I understand the concerns of the mother, father and sister, what I don't understand is the MC, I mean, he knows he did wrong, but to cry and feel so bad? It seems like he is a kid who is smarter and not a reincarnated person who lived another life, I understand that his previous family did something bad to him, but comparing that and destroying your family with disappearing and your parents worrying is a bit forced for the story, I don't know, it feels a bit forced that scene to reinforce to the reader that the MC is a good guy, that he has problems not yet overcome from his previous family and that he wants love and all that.