Dyrem
hey author, if you had to select an option to fight this guy (in gif) would you chose: - 3 weak random guys with sticks - 1 fighting expert with a really good weapon the answer seems obvious, because in you story the mc could use his points to do the same kind of choice: - 3 shadows - 1 with a lvl 5 weapon (or more) + 1 skill (maybe even a second shadow helper Now, my point is that the story looks to be a bit forced (my opinion). the mc win more point but suddenly there are like -1200 points out ou nowhere. And after that you will had mecha on top of everything. Im sorry but im already imagining a huge mess, a low quality story developpement and a drop from your side. I just hope that you will really think about you are gonna write later. And reflect on what anybody (may it be intelligent/dumb/sadic or anything) would do without the knowledge of the author