Comments of chapter undefined of Martial Spirit Cultivation

I think: He was at a loss for words will be better here

I think that story a quite typical, it’s interesting nevertheless. You nailed some of the descriptions of the scenes. As for the things that can be improved, the wording of some sentences I think. Also, you should probably add more thrilling details in the pilot, it's there but I felt like it lacked impacts. well, I am not a specialist at this so my advice is quite superficial., but the rest of the chapter was well done, though. Keep up the good work!👌