I_am_Creator
I’m really enjoying the story! I agree with the comments about errors and using the wrong pronoun occassionally. Pronouns are the most common error. But if English isn’t your primary language, you are still doing an amazing job that you should be proud of. 😊 Also, I really like the way Evan’s personality has developed! She felt a little plain at the beginning, but she has so much spirit now. Love it. 🧡