Comments of chapter undefined of New Place, New name

After showing you the potential of your novel i will now show you the potential in your title Life in a New World is Easy, Or Am I Just A Pro. The name of your title has potential for the novel to have comedic elements. With that title you can get away with having an oblivious character and having stuff just happen around them. With the way you have written it so far this points can be added without messing what you have written so far.