Silver72
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awesome
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Great chapter. Be careful with suddenly switching from third to first person, but otherwise, the writing was good
interesting opening
hey guys, so I'm doing edits on all my chapters, I've completed the first chapter and will be doing 1-2 chapters every day, if you find any errors or mistakes please let me know.
opening of the story is very good
very intriguing! this chapter makes me want to read more đ
confusing...
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