Mr. Yan
Mrs. Long has been ranting, nagging, and bullying for 3 chapters long! Isn't that too long already? oh yes, pun intended. I guess, you just want to establish that Liam will be forever indebted to Nora and will help her get materials at the Library. This or any other plot could've been established in 1 chapter. This is beginning to be too dragging already since you don't upload all chapters at the same time. With the long wait, readers are losing interest already.