Mr. Yan
You really should not ask your readers their thoughts when you do not pay any attention to them. (1) I'm your Mommy use up 4 chapters (2) Birthday Party use 4 chapters (3)Now Birthday Presents has so far used 5 chapters. Honestly instead of 13 chapters this could have been put into 3 chapters. And the biggest point is you spend so much time on irrelevant side stories that the book is losing the excitement that pull your readers into the story at the beginning. Stick to the story line and stop the madness of your greed. In the end you are going to lose readers that after this will not attempt to read any additional books that you have. Author 101 this is not the way to be famous.