X3nr0x_Starfield
to be honest I'm not particularly like this development, things just too sudden I mean I respect the author that tried to makes things different from the original but this is too much, I mean there's a reason why it's called 'fanfic' in the first place and not original. people expect something different but not too far from the original.
Thanks for the chapter and honestly I dont really mind the kind of development of the story you went for cause if you keep following the original script or just changing it by bits you will get bored by it sooner or later and just drop the ff so i dont mind much ill only start to criticize once I see more development of the story.