Daniel_Lowe_9357
really like the concept of this and looking forward to reading more, however this could really do with a chapter before or even a prologue that explained a bit more about the world or the magic? it could even start the story before he gets his affinity, like how did he get that affinity? would also be great to get some more basic information about the people around him like his parents names? but overall it reads well and the concept is really cool