Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Arcane Thief

is the fan ranking the power stone one? Nice chapter! Kinda sad about the fact that System forced him to make friends with Rose's friends, but i get that he was going to be alone that he could be barely called human at that point... Also like the fact that Daphne is a nice girl and Neville is still the scaredy cat he always was (at the beginning of the serie)

also loved that Bellatrix actually said everything to Andromeda

please don't force him to make friends like this. Try to make it more natural, it's not that if he is not forced by the system he will not make friends.

This fanfic is really good I am just worried that it will suffer from the harry potter fanfic curse of not getting past the first year of Hogwarts before being abandoned.

I guess it could be grindlewald, Nicole leafy or is it the conflict between wizards and muggles. I also wanted to ask if you gave him this condition to resemble Doctor Strange?

i dropped it here forcing him to be friends with someone is just trash

bro it was literally said by the system " you are heading down a loner path, while normally it wouldn't be a problem, in this case you need allies and leadership skills". And MC just wanted to leave the compartment and not having anything to do with the golden quintet

if the system called mc the people he would manipulate instead of a friend. mc seems like a smart, sensible person. if the author makes mc stupid, plays the protagonist.i will quit the novel. going well so far, keep it up.

I do;vt know why but this mission about making friends or making an impression, severly killed it for me...i liked the mc being a loner. I don't what the author is thinking introducing an extremely unsocial mc and then having him make friends...i would have rather liked him keep being a vindictive loner...sometimes character development is unnecessary.

since mc killed Lord Greengrass, by right of conquest he will be the next Lord no?

Of course the mission to make friends happens after he blew off Hermione. Ffs.

Tout va bien pour le mieux jusqu'à la fin avec ces " battements ", là je n'ai absolument pas compris. Si c'était moi, j'aurais changé la scène pour qu'un accident arrivé à cette rose Potter si j'ai bien retenu son nom. Elle aura beaucoup de battements de cœur en se retrouvant en incapacité musculaire permanent. On va voir comment elle va réagir à sa situation. Ha ! Ha ! Je déteste déjà ce personnage 🤬🤬

Thank you for the chapter. It's true that Bellatrix messed things up with him and I don't know if her even apologizing to him will fix anything, but I hope that at least he and Andromeda can fix the misunderstanding between them, she doesn't seem like a bad person to me so far 👍

isn't he a loner. why did he say yes to the mission

C'mon bro... I have already poured all my power stones in this chapter again, don't leave us hanging here

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

please don’t make it so Rose is the love interest make it so it’s Daphne bc that would make more sense for him

when do his hands get healed so i can skip to there.

Thxs for the chap