Comments of chapter undefined of The First Store System

I feel that you should place him in such situations a couple of times but only in the early stages. It would be better if he became an unbeatable existence that can make literally anything happen in the later part of the novel. Showing his development.

This truly doesn’t make sense in regards to what was shown about his personality a chapter ago. He previously said he wouldn’t kill people if they did him no wrong, yet now he’s fine with killing innocent people just because some people of the family offended / tried to kill him? Even the servants that would likley be at that family / people of that family that did nothing to him?

this is just my opinion here, and likely won't line up with others. I find his personality really tiring to try and feel comfortable with. It was once said that he was excited to meet other people and listen to the stories of those that are not at the end of their ropes. however now that there is someone, he barely sees her first more than a customer or even a tool to get what he wants and nothing more. Instead of having his own ideas or opinions he blindly follows the whims of a naughty child, or the system. If the system hadn't stated he should not be the one to instigate, I feel lily would have just been allowed to kill every customer on sight, and he would just shrug it off. As I cannot feel myself in the position of the MC I have a hard time rewarding further, just my 2 cents. wish ya the best author.

mix in both please

Thanks for the chap

First

He should think

Todo iba bien hasta que borraste los recuerdos

pretty flop but forgiveable

mix in both please

too much drama.