Comments of chapter undefined of The First Store System

hmm I don't like memory plots

Finally some actual story

Beautiful chapter author

Yeah I like it author

so the system kidnapped the mc to help man the store? xD

bruh why a flashback

Xp

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chap

memories lost are silly unless plot build into it... however it dificult to like them. it hard to imagine yourself losing memory and it put a wall between me and the character! story is good except this knock me out of the immersion .

You could call the previous chapters a prolog. Good so far I like what you are doing

so did he bought a system from a store like his then the price is his memory? owo

I love the story its great, but worried about the memory plot, it might ruin the story. Definitely reading this.

Was worried it wasn’t about the store but about the inferno guy

this is nice definitely nice

Loves the introduction to this

abstract.. interesting...

Thanks for writing. I'm loving the story so far.