Comments of chapter undefined of Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

I think the pacing of your book is great. Most FanFics tend to brush past things and speed up the pace. I feel this negatively affects the story as moments of character or world-building are missed or replaced with inadequate exposition and simply stating things that should be shown. Additionally, it is possible that changing the pacing of the story would make feel different than what has come before. However, as the person who actually has to write it, you should probably just do what you feel best. Keep up the great work. :)

you are doing great. i started reading your book ever since you started uploading. I've seen how much you have improved and read all 36 amazing chapters. the chapters are almost 8,300 words each chapter. you don't see that kind of consistency with big chapters anywhere. if you are not a great author, then noone can claim to be. You have changed much of canon so its hard to follow it, though i would really like to see some more of canon. the change of pov is great.

thanks for the chap, and I love the pacing. the way you pace compared to others is why I personally consider this the best naruto fan fic on here

I’m kinda confused and I need confirmation. Hurin is Naruto right? I just need someone to confirm this.

Love how you didnt make danzo invincible like other fanfics

thank you for the chapter 😁

love your book. But in hirozens perspective, how can it be danzo. Danz only lost his arm to Kurama and his new arm was made later.

great chapter

Great chapter !!! Ty

Thanks for the chapter on a good story