TheHiddenSword
Thanks for the chapter. Personally i dont really like how this story seems like it will develop in the future. Atleast based on this Freya filled end. I really didnt like the whole Bar fight, Freya never sent anybody to almost kill Bell she just had him fight stronger monsters. I dont like Freya knowing his a cultivator so early on. He is a weakling and he cant handle even the easiest test from her. I would have prefered if she was just curious and found out later own when he was stronger and could actually defend himself. Well for now im dropping this story. Not forever. Just until theres at least 10 chapters stockpiled. Maybe more than 10. That way i can just read the story for what it is. If i keep reading it one chapter at a time im just going to get annoyed by his lack of development and strength.
I thought this was very interesting for an the idea of a novel. But so far Freya, Mc being weak, etc. This is getting mildly annoying/infurating to read. I am gonna put off reading this for a while, I need something "satisfactory" to read. Current chapters always put me in a sour mood, so am gonna need to read something else to fulfill the "satisfactory" feel of a read.