OsukaGrande
i would advise against writing "Dodge SFX" from what I've seen most people don't like it myself included
Sorry for the late. Well, I will definitely not use it. Even I, after reading this right now have a kind of cringe moment.
I like your novel a lot, and there is only 1 advice I can think of, that would be to title chapter [img=recommend]
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