Comments of chapter undefined of World of magic: Vampiric Reincarnation

OsukaGrande

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heheheheheLv3hehehehehe

I like your novel a lot, and there is only 1 advice I can think of, that would be to title chapter [img=recommend]

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OsukaGrandeAuthorOsukaGrande

Thank you, I will apply it in the future.

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Deputy618Lv14Deputy618

i would advise against writing "Dodge SFX" from what I've seen most people don't like it myself included

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