Adrain_Garcia
I am sorry if you aren't finding the mc interesting... At this point, I can't do anything about it. Plus since it's my first try, I tried to make it look more interactive since I was starting to think that the mc is just rambling on in one situation. And personally, if you think that mc is being impatient then what would you have done if you were one day woke up on an island with only a handful of people you know...? Even if we consider, no, I make him look smart this still doesn't mean that he will be entirely fine with every situation. It takes time to adjust to new surroundings. So I would really appreciate it if you could overlook things ... but at the end of the day, I am still improving so thanks for letting me know your views on this!
KairenConan:1. He tries to make trouble so many times 2. So many unnecessary conversations (smart people don’t talk much) 3. Why couldn’t he just cooperate? (Like, so many of his problems could be solved if he’s just a little patient) 4. Lack of ability to solve problems 5. Mc trying to look smart but isn’t smart